December 25thToday, I had part time job from 13:00 to 22:00, before day I come home at 5:00. So, I was sleep. I got up 11:00 and I went to the job. I worked hard. After the job I would go Christmas party but I caught a cold. So, I went to home and I slept early time. Today was Christmas. . My ideal Christmas plan is that I want to spend with my boy friend and I would go driving to see night view. Also, we ate dinner in expensive shop and we went to home. Next, we ate cake which I made. This is my ideal Christmas plan. What did you do in Christmas?.Also. did you spend with someone?
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2008年12月27日土曜日
2008年12月26日金曜日
December 24th
December 24th
Today is Christmas Eve!! I had part time job from 11:00 to 16:00. After that, I bought two cakes in my shop. One cake is for my family, another is took for my friends. I went to my friend house, we went to shopping in hirose. We bought meet, vegetable, drink and cheese. We cooked carry nabe. It is my boom and taste is good! We enterd cheese, that was good taste. We ate very much, we ate cake which I took. Cake was very delicious.
We spend good time. After that, my friends pick me up and we bought Santa costume. We went to karaoke and change Santa costume. I spend much time too. 117
Today is Christmas Eve!! I had part time job from 11:00 to 16:00. After that, I bought two cakes in my shop. One cake is for my family, another is took for my friends. I went to my friend house, we went to shopping in hirose. We bought meet, vegetable, drink and cheese. We cooked carry nabe. It is my boom and taste is good! We enterd cheese, that was good taste. We ate very much, we ate cake which I took. Cake was very delicious.
We spend good time. After that, my friends pick me up and we bought Santa costume. We went to karaoke and change Santa costume. I spend much time too. 117
December 23rd
December 23rd
I had part time job from 11:00 to 16:00. After that, I went to party. I and my friend went to shopping. We bought much foods and drinks. We cut vegetable and made “nabe”. I enjoyed very much. Tomorrow is Christmas eve!!!
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I had part time job from 11:00 to 16:00. After that, I went to party. I and my friend went to shopping. We bought much foods and drinks. We cut vegetable and made “nabe”. I enjoyed very much. Tomorrow is Christmas eve!!!
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2008年12月22日月曜日
Student ID: 07164
Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1a OR 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | web site review | 08.09.29 | 5 | 375 | 0 | 1 | 4 | 0 |
| Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | My favorite place | 08.10.15 | 4 | 451 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | Movie review: Mrs. Doubtfire | 08.10.29 | 3 | 140 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | Movie review: Mrs. Doubtfire | 08.11.12 | 4 | 250 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | Essay Secret of Kumamoto: NIght & fearful SPOT | 08.11.26 | 5 | 263 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | learning with computer | 08.12.10 | 6 | 251 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Totals | --- | --- | 27 | 1730 | 0 | 1 | 4 | 0 |
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¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | ||||
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | ||||
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- ...
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
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3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | The Kidnappers | 08.10.07 | 204 | 0 |
| 2-02 | A New Zealand ADVENTURE | 09.01.07 | 137 | 0 |
| 2-03 | The Blue cat club | 09.01.07 | 128 | 0 |
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
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| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | √ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | √ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | √ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...
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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).- ...
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6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
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- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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2008年12月18日木曜日
December 15th 16th
Today I have 4 classes, I have to hand report at French class. After that, I met a friend. We ate dinner and karaoke. We sung a song about 1 hour and talked about tomorrow. Because I have to go officer party. I became the director in charge of general affairs. So I have to do talent tomorrow. My friends thought for me the talent. We prepared it about 2 hours and we went to friend’s house to see the talent. We met friend and I displayed my talent. She laughed the talent and we met another friend. I displayed the talent to him too. He laughed too… I and my friend were happy. We talked about many things and parted from him. We went to home at 0:00.
Next day, I went to school wearing suit and I attended class from 2 to 4. To tell the truth, I have 5 class but I got together at 6:00. I didn’t attend the class. At 6:00, I and my friends went to kogane. We wait until starting the party, everyone started come to kogane. We welcomed them and party start at7:00. We made a round of courtesy calls. At last, the time is coming to do talent. I was very nervous. When I finished the talent, I became composed. I could enjoy the party. After the party, we went to happy fish. It is the shop which is Asian taste. I enjoyed there too. I could talk many people. After that, I and my friend went to friend’s house. Next morning, we went to home and changed clothes. I went to KGU and attend 3 class. I was very sleepy… I and my friend went to general meeting. After that, we went to see movie. We watched ‘worry’. The story was that there is s robot in earth. There is no person because no one can live in earth. People change their life in Mars. People entrust all thing to machine. So, all people grow stout. They can’t walk, sit down and stand up. Worry is clean earth by himself. Another robot come to earth. They make a friends and they made people change. People come back to earth and became working by themselves. I feel it was impressed movie. After that, we went to home. I can take good sleep. 402
Today I have 4 classes, I have to hand report at French class. After that, I met a friend. We ate dinner and karaoke. We sung a song about 1 hour and talked about tomorrow. Because I have to go officer party. I became the director in charge of general affairs. So I have to do talent tomorrow. My friends thought for me the talent. We prepared it about 2 hours and we went to friend’s house to see the talent. We met friend and I displayed my talent. She laughed the talent and we met another friend. I displayed the talent to him too. He laughed too… I and my friend were happy. We talked about many things and parted from him. We went to home at 0:00.
Next day, I went to school wearing suit and I attended class from 2 to 4. To tell the truth, I have 5 class but I got together at 6:00. I didn’t attend the class. At 6:00, I and my friends went to kogane. We wait until starting the party, everyone started come to kogane. We welcomed them and party start at7:00. We made a round of courtesy calls. At last, the time is coming to do talent. I was very nervous. When I finished the talent, I became composed. I could enjoy the party. After the party, we went to happy fish. It is the shop which is Asian taste. I enjoyed there too. I could talk many people. After that, I and my friend went to friend’s house. Next morning, we went to home and changed clothes. I went to KGU and attend 3 class. I was very sleepy… I and my friend went to general meeting. After that, we went to see movie. We watched ‘worry’. The story was that there is s robot in earth. There is no person because no one can live in earth. People change their life in Mars. People entrust all thing to machine. So, all people grow stout. They can’t walk, sit down and stand up. Worry is clean earth by himself. Another robot come to earth. They make a friends and they made people change. People come back to earth and became working by themselves. I feel it was impressed movie. After that, we went to home. I can take good sleep. 402
2008年12月10日水曜日
night view
Today is Bungei's board party. I went to these party at first time. So, we have to wear suit in his morning. We got together at 6:00 and we went to the shop by walking. When we arrived at there, many people already waiting the front of the shop. I thought I an a stranger. I didn't be friend... However party is starting, I make a friend some people. I enjoyed the party. The party was finished at 21:00 and my older picked us and we went driving. We went to mt.kinpou. It can see very beautiful night view. I talked much time and we could see the night view long time. After that, they send us our home. I went to home at 2:00 and I sept early. Next day, I can go class without rating.
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essay: learning with computer
We can learn many things using a computer. For example, internet, download music, watching movies, editing sentence, e-mail, blog, typing, and chat. Also, we can communicate with people. Mail, blogging and chat are useful contact with friends and someone. Also, we can get much information using a computer. By using internet, we can get information which we want to know. If you have information which you want to know, you could know immediately.
Computer is convenient and useful. We can learn with computer.One of that is communication. We contact friends and other people and we can exchange information like talking. For example, we can use e-mail and chat. These are very useful in communication.
Next is information. We can get much information using internet. If you had some question, you could search at once. However, we have to pay attention because web site has wrong information an occasions. So, we must not swallow all information on web site.
Third is connecting. Computer is connection in network so we can connect other people easily using e-mail. Computer is very convenient because we can acquire knowledge, contact with friends, making papers.
Fourth is a quality. Computer is evolving more and more in recent years. Present computer is very useful and helpful.
So, we can many things using a computer. I often make use of computer. I use word, excel, e－mail, blog, and internet. I think computer become main communication way.
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Computer is convenient and useful. We can learn with computer.One of that is communication. We contact friends and other people and we can exchange information like talking. For example, we can use e-mail and chat. These are very useful in communication.
Next is information. We can get much information using internet. If you had some question, you could search at once. However, we have to pay attention because web site has wrong information an occasions. So, we must not swallow all information on web site.
Third is connecting. Computer is connection in network so we can connect other people easily using e-mail. Computer is very convenient because we can acquire knowledge, contact with friends, making papers.
Fourth is a quality. Computer is evolving more and more in recent years. Present computer is very useful and helpful.
So, we can many things using a computer. I often make use of computer. I use word, excel, e－mail, blog, and internet. I think computer become main communication way.
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brain storm
information
knowledge
type skill
making graph
pictures
listening to music
watching muvies
download music
editing
word
excel
internet
mailing
contact
useful
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knowledge
type skill
making graph
pictures
listening to music
watching muvies
download music
editing
word
excel
internet
mailing
contact
useful
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2008年12月8日月曜日
December 8th
TodayI went to sopping with my family. I didn't drive long time but I drove car. I could drive a car. When we arrived at the shop, we walk around many shops. Next. We went to eat lunch. We entered okonomiyaki shop. We ordered okonomiyaki and noodle. It was very delicious. Afte that, I walked again and I bought clothes, under wear, and pyjamas. I was in a good mood. Also, we came home in my car. I could come home safely. I thought I had better drive car par a week. I want to be good driver.
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2008年12月6日土曜日
December 6th
I met a friend. He is Chinese. I had met him at YMCA. I went to there to do volunteer. He could speak Japanese well so I think he is like a Japanese. I went to have a lunch so wen went to a cafe. After that, we went to took print club. He likes it very much. Also, we went to kami street. He would go college in Nagoya this spring. I cheer him!!
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2008年12月4日木曜日
Decenber 4th
Today, I have to hand in report in reding class. After the class, I wen to shopping with my friend. I went to Parco and we bought clothes, we went to dinner. We went to Uotami to practice drinking beer. Because I have to drink beer next party. We ordered two beer, karaage, takowasa, nabe, and ice crem. Shop assatant took two beer and we did a toast. We drunk beer but it's very bitter. I tought that I have never drunk it. However we finished drinking it. I thought I can drink much. When we went out the shop, we can not walk normaly. My feel is not good. I thought I don't want to drink beer again, we went to ome at 22:00. I would ike to go my friend's work place, but I can't go there. I'm very sorry...
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2008年12月3日水曜日
Decenber 3rd
Today. I came home about 5:00. So,I bought digital camera. I went to home at 5:00, I went to buy the camera with my mother. We went to deo deo. It's electric shop. We showed many digital camera but we didn't know which camera is good. So, I ask a shop assistant. He recommend fujifilm. So, I decide buying the camera. The camera is pink and its camera's cm is ebi chan. It's became to be my favourite camera. I thought I would take many pictures. I want to leave many memories.
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2008年11月26日水曜日
Essay Secret of Kumamoto: NIght & fearful SPOT
I introduce two secret spots which I know. One is a night view spots. I've ever been to there. Another secret spot is psychic spots. However, I have never been to these spots. I heard my friends who have been to there and I saw a picture which looks like arm...
At first, I introduce some night view spot. Night view spots are forest of fantasy, pet cemetery.Forest of fantasy is in Aso, I went there in this summer vacation. I could see many stars. My favorite place is pet cemetery. It could see beautiful night view. Pet cemetery is near East bypass. I went with my friends last winter. It was very beautiful view. I like there the best.
Next introduction is psychic spots! I don't like these spots because I can't see horror movies. However my friend teaches me about the place. My friend has psychic picture. My friend went to pearl line hotel in Amakusa and took a picture his cell phone as commemoration. The picture fell on like arm!! It was non existent because the side is wall. The hotel was caught in a fire and many people dead.
Also, the hotel is left. Another psychic spot is Utosatsu. The spot is the place happened murder case but I only hear from friends, no one go there... I think that it is not good going for fun half seriously.
These spots are secret of Kumamoto. If you know other good places, please teach me. Also, if you want to go any place, please ask me. Let’ go together!!!
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At first, I introduce some night view spot. Night view spots are forest of fantasy, pet cemetery.Forest of fantasy is in Aso, I went there in this summer vacation. I could see many stars. My favorite place is pet cemetery. It could see beautiful night view. Pet cemetery is near East bypass. I went with my friends last winter. It was very beautiful view. I like there the best.
Next introduction is psychic spots! I don't like these spots because I can't see horror movies. However my friend teaches me about the place. My friend has psychic picture. My friend went to pearl line hotel in Amakusa and took a picture his cell phone as commemoration. The picture fell on like arm!! It was non existent because the side is wall. The hotel was caught in a fire and many people dead.
Also, the hotel is left. Another psychic spot is Utosatsu. The spot is the place happened murder case but I only hear from friends, no one go there... I think that it is not good going for fun half seriously.
These spots are secret of Kumamoto. If you know other good places, please teach me. Also, if you want to go any place, please ask me. Let’ go together!!!
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Brain storm A well kept secret or little-known aspect of Kumamoto
a night view spot
Aso
pet cemetery
camp site
Mt. hanaoka
psychics spot
tabaruzaka
utosatu
pearl line hotel
Akahasi
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Aso
pet cemetery
camp site
Mt. hanaoka
psychics spot
tabaruzaka
utosatu
pearl line hotel
Akahasi
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2008年11月19日水曜日
Best movie review
I choose Emiri's essay as best essay. Because Her essay has many picture, movie, and colors.
Next, I thik her essay is easy to read. So, I choose Emiri's essay.
http://dialoguediary.blogspot.com/2008/11/es2-03mrsdoubtfire.html
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Next, I thik her essay is easy to read. So, I choose Emiri's essay.
http://dialoguediary.blogspot.com/2008/11/es2-03mrsdoubtfire.html
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2008年11月12日水曜日
essay: my community YMCA
I introduce my community YMCA in Kumamoto because I belong youth volunteer circle. I entered the circle in April this year because I hear about the circle fromThe circle member is about 30 and we usually get together second Tuesday a month, we talk with foreign countries people. Also, we plan next event. These days I was very busy and I couldn't go there, however I will start going there next month again.
In May we hold a party to welcome to foreign country people. We prepared some dishes, games, and Kraft. We divided four groups and I was cooking group. So, I prepared some dishes. We cooked Japanese dishes. We played some games using English and Japanese. We made a friend at the time. After that, we make "Uchiwa" in Kraft. We can write free message in it. We enjoyed the party very much.
We can talk with foreign people very much. Their age and their citizen are different. However we can make friends if we went the circle. I made friends from Chinese, America, Spain, Uganda so on. After the circle, we usually go to dinner with circle member. We talked many things there.
We are going to hold school festival. We have some planned a year. This year, we did some volunteer. We have plan for Yukata festival, school festival, Christmas party so on.
I think that the circle is good opportunity for me. So, I want to keep going to the circle.
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In May we hold a party to welcome to foreign country people. We prepared some dishes, games, and Kraft. We divided four groups and I was cooking group. So, I prepared some dishes. We cooked Japanese dishes. We played some games using English and Japanese. We made a friend at the time. After that, we make "Uchiwa" in Kraft. We can write free message in it. We enjoyed the party very much.
We can talk with foreign people very much. Their age and their citizen are different. However we can make friends if we went the circle. I made friends from Chinese, America, Spain, Uganda so on. After the circle, we usually go to dinner with circle member. We talked many things there.
We are going to hold school festival. We have some planned a year. This year, we did some volunteer. We have plan for Yukata festival, school festival, Christmas party so on.
I think that the circle is good opportunity for me. So, I want to keep going to the circle.
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Essay: Community life
YMCA
get together par a month
foegin peole
party
talking
go to dinner
school festival
voluntter
plan
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get together par a month
foegin peole
party
talking
go to dinner
school festival
voluntter
plan
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Part time job
I have two part time job, one is moss barger and another job is cooking staff in Itarian restaurant.
I started the job 1 years ago. I usually work there 4 times a week and I cook pasta and pizza. So I can make pasta about 30 valiations, pizza is 20 valiations.
I like the part time job because member is good.
So, I thoght I try to keep working.
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I started the job 1 years ago. I usually work there 4 times a week and I cook pasta and pizza. So I can make pasta about 30 valiations, pizza is 20 valiations.
I like the part time job because member is good.
So, I thoght I try to keep working.
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2008年11月7日金曜日
Friend's Brthday!!!
November 7 th was my bert friend's bithday. So, I congratulate her birthday with mi friend. My best friend is same hometown and we have known each other since 14 years. Because we went to samepiano school. However we went different elementary school , we met in junior high school
and we belong same club. She is interesting , kind and we are get along well.
In my birthday, she took me firework fesrwork festival and conglaturate me! She gave me album which she made it and present. I was very surprised and happy.
So, I prepared for her a surprised plan!
It was prepared cake, present, album, cracker and I call another friend. We would go to Gyukaku so I took cake before we went there. Also, I told clerk "Plese took it after dinner." I met her and him and we went there again. We ate very much and a clerk took cake for her. She was very surprised.
Next, we went to a shop and we bought sparkler and we went to Mt.Hanaoka. We can very biautiful night view there. Also, we count her birthday and set off a cracker at 0:00 and I gave two presents to her. One is a album which I made, another present is courrage pierced earrings.
She was surprised at these presents. I was very happy too.
After that, we went to arbor and we did toy sparkler and a skyrocket. It was very cold but we were in high spirits. Next, we went to karaoke free time and we went home at 6:00. I spent much time!!!
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and we belong same club. She is interesting , kind and we are get along well.
In my birthday, she took me firework fesrwork festival and conglaturate me! She gave me album which she made it and present. I was very surprised and happy.
So, I prepared for her a surprised plan!
It was prepared cake, present, album, cracker and I call another friend. We would go to Gyukaku so I took cake before we went there. Also, I told clerk "Plese took it after dinner." I met her and him and we went there again. We ate very much and a clerk took cake for her. She was very surprised.
Next, we went to a shop and we bought sparkler and we went to Mt.Hanaoka. We can very biautiful night view there. Also, we count her birthday and set off a cracker at 0:00 and I gave two presents to her. One is a album which I made, another present is courrage pierced earrings.
She was surprised at these presents. I was very happy too.
After that, we went to arbor and we did toy sparkler and a skyrocket. It was very cold but we were in high spirits. Next, we went to karaoke free time and we went home at 6:00. I spent much time!!!
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2008年11月6日木曜日
2008年10月29日水曜日
Movie review: Mrs. Doubtfire
Family and Love
Main character is Daniel. He is very interesting and he likes fun everyone and he love his family. He liked his children very well.
However he and his wife Miranda are divoced because he has no job and he couldn't put in order. So, He changed a housekeeper and he could put in order by himself. He could meet his children.
After watching this film, I tought he loves his family very much. So, this film made me notice family love and children are loved their parents unconditionaly. Daniel always enjoying his children. Children loved their father. I thought he is a good father. Also, he loves his wife. He likes fun everyone.
Next, I think that there are many style in family. For example Daniel and milanda were divocd but they were not dislike each other, and they met about par a week. I thought why they live with each other. However I thought it is good style for them.
Main character is Daniel. He is very interesting and he likes fun everyone and he love his family. He liked his children very well.
However he and his wife Miranda are divoced because he has no job and he couldn't put in order. So, He changed a housekeeper and he could put in order by himself. He could meet his children.
After watching this film, I tought he loves his family very much. So, this film made me notice family love and children are loved their parents unconditionaly. Daniel always enjoying his children. Children loved their father. I thought he is a good father. Also, he loves his wife. He likes fun everyone.
Next, I think that there are many style in family. For example Daniel and milanda were divocd but they were not dislike each other, and they met about par a week. I thought why they live with each other. However I thought it is good style for them.
2008年10月26日日曜日
Dinner with friends
Today, I went to drink with my friends. They are same part time job. We went to Sumikagura. The
shop is very fashionable and dishes are delicious. We ate very much. After that, we went to Karaoke with my friends. We sung a song long time. Next day, I have to go part time job at 12:00 I went to home at 1:00. I enjoyed very much. Next day I went to part time job from 12;00 to 22:00. In job, I am cooking pasta and pizza. However, customer is few, so I could go home at 21:00. I ‘m looking forward to coming next salary day!!!
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shop is very fashionable and dishes are delicious. We ate very much. After that, we went to Karaoke with my friends. We sung a song long time. Next day, I have to go part time job at 12:00 I went to home at 1:00. I enjoyed very much. Next day I went to part time job from 12;00 to 22:00. In job, I am cooking pasta and pizza. However, customer is few, so I could go home at 21:00. I ‘m looking forward to coming next salary day!!!
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2008年10月15日水曜日
My favorite place
My favorite place is Amakusa, because that is the place I was born. My name shiori so shio means the sea and ri means my home town. My name is connected in Amakusa
I lived in there when I was 3 years. My house is near the sea so I often go to the sea with my father. I remember the day I went to the sea with my father. Amakusa has the sea, beach, shop, sailboat, and dolphins. When I lived in Amakusa I went fishing and swimming.
Since I moved other place, I didn't go Amakusa.However, I often go there when we entered in this university. I went to Amakusa last summer vacation and this summer vacation. I went camping with circle member last summer vacation. When we saw sea, the sea was very beautiful and sky was blue. Also, I went to Amakusa this summer vacation. I went to bathe in the sea with my friends. We went to Amakusa in my friend’s car, we talked about many things. It takes 2 hours from Kumamoto city to Amakusa. We can drive to talk and listening music. We crossed on a bridge. On the way, we went to Amakusa, we watches a hotel. The hotel is not used now and it was caught in a fire. So, the hotel is a spot of fearful. We were talking about the story. We arrived at the sea we changed a bathing suit and we swam the sea. We rode a banana boat. We enjoyed very much.
We can do swimming, fishing, driving in Amakusa. Also, we can watch dolphins and scuba diving. We can feel refreshed.
This summer vacation, I went to Amakusa with my friends at night. Also, we did toy sparkler in the shore. Amakusa has much charm.
My ideal plan is that I go to Amakusa by car with my friends and we talked many things, listening to music and singing. We arrived in the mornings. Also, we start preparing BBQ and we swam the sea and we go fishing by ship and we saw dolphins.Next, we are cooking the fish and make dinner. After that, we make campfire and we talked a dreadful story and we went test courage. And we do a sparkler. Next day, we start swimming in the sea, we baked Kumamoto at noon and we drop in joyful in lunch. Also, we arrived at Kumamoto in evening. This is my ideal plan, so we will carry out in next summer vacation with my friends.
So, Amakusa is my favorite place.
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I lived in there when I was 3 years. My house is near the sea so I often go to the sea with my father. I remember the day I went to the sea with my father. Amakusa has the sea, beach, shop, sailboat, and dolphins. When I lived in Amakusa I went fishing and swimming.
Since I moved other place, I didn't go Amakusa.However, I often go there when we entered in this university. I went to Amakusa last summer vacation and this summer vacation. I went camping with circle member last summer vacation. When we saw sea, the sea was very beautiful and sky was blue. Also, I went to Amakusa this summer vacation. I went to bathe in the sea with my friends. We went to Amakusa in my friend’s car, we talked about many things. It takes 2 hours from Kumamoto city to Amakusa. We can drive to talk and listening music. We crossed on a bridge. On the way, we went to Amakusa, we watches a hotel. The hotel is not used now and it was caught in a fire. So, the hotel is a spot of fearful. We were talking about the story. We arrived at the sea we changed a bathing suit and we swam the sea. We rode a banana boat. We enjoyed very much.
We can do swimming, fishing, driving in Amakusa. Also, we can watch dolphins and scuba diving. We can feel refreshed.
This summer vacation, I went to Amakusa with my friends at night. Also, we did toy sparkler in the shore. Amakusa has much charm.
My ideal plan is that I go to Amakusa by car with my friends and we talked many things, listening to music and singing. We arrived in the mornings. Also, we start preparing BBQ and we swam the sea and we go fishing by ship and we saw dolphins.Next, we are cooking the fish and make dinner. After that, we make campfire and we talked a dreadful story and we went test courage. And we do a sparkler. Next day, we start swimming in the sea, we baked Kumamoto at noon and we drop in joyful in lunch. Also, we arrived at Kumamoto in evening. This is my ideal plan, so we will carry out in next summer vacation with my friends.
So, Amakusa is my favorite place.
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2008年10月7日火曜日
BR:2-01:The Kidnappers
I choose the book because I like this series. This book was that kidnapper, main character is kipper. kipper is a boy who has magic key. The key is take him an adventure and this time it tooks him an adventure. He went to animal world with his toys. They went on the aeroplane to Switzerland. when the plane lnded everyone got off. There were lots and lots of bears. They took a bus and they went to front of the gate in fesstival. Kipper and his friends found a good place to sit. Suddenly, every one shouted and cheered because a famous singer bear had come on the stage. After his live, they looked that some nasty bears were pushing the famous bears into a car. It was a kidnap. The car spend away. Kipper and his friends ran after the car as fast as he could. Kipper and his friends went to the house. Kipper rand a bell. Some bears came to the door. Kipper and his friends gave honey for them. While they ate honey, Kipper and his friends help kidnapped bear. The nasty bears didn't see them because they were too busy eating the honey. One of the nasty bears
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2008年10月6日月曜日
web site review rewrite
I found very pretty web site. This site is cake shop’s site and it has many pictures. The site is divided by wedding cakes, baby cakes, cakes for kids, cupcakes & cookies, traditional cakes, transportation cakes, sporting cakes, cakes with photo, corporate cakes.
At first, wedding cakes are very beautiful, it made three steps. These wedding cakes are not white color but also many colors. Baby cakes are very pretty. These designs are dot, many flowers, and popular characters. Cakes for kids are very pop. These cakes made many characters and colors. Cup cakes & cookies are very pretty too!!! Cup cakes are painted cream and chocolate chips etc. these cakes has many design. I like specially Elmo’s cupcake. It is very real. Cookies are very pretty too. Because it used to some characters. For example Mickey mouse, Donald duck, spider man, and finding nimo.
A next, traditional cake has different form. For example, heart, number, square cakes so on. Transportation cakes are very funny because these cakes shape are car, truck, and a sailboat. These cakes are very real I was impressed those cakes very much. Sporting cakes are soccer, baseball, tennis, rugby, swimming and so on. Corporate cakes are used by advertisement I think.
My favorite cakes vest three is baby cakes 1st picture, because it is like a castle. No2 is wedding cakes second picture, because it is simple but magnificent. So, no1 is elmo’s cup cakes. It is very pretty!!
When I see this web site is that all cakes used many color and colorful. And I think these are very sweet. However American cakes are very pretty and these cakes are not in Japan. So, if I went to America, I want to eat these cakes.I am interested in cakes and sweets. I like making cupcakes, it’s my boom. I bought a book of cupcakes. However American cupcakes are pretty than the cake of book. Next boom is making fake sweets. It is made clay and it is like evry real. I like collecting sweets goods too. So, I was very impressed to see this web site. I thought I want to make these cakes!!!
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2008年9月29日月曜日
web site review
I found very pretty web site. This site is cake shop’s site and it has many pictures. The site is divided by wedding cakes, baby cakes, cakes for kids, cupcakes & cookies, traditional cakes, transportation cakes, sporting cakes, cakes with photo, corporate cakes.
At first, wedding cakes are very beautiful, it made three steps. These wedding cakes are not white color but also many colors. Baby cakes are very pretty. These designs are dot, many flowers, and popular characters. Cakes for kids are very pop. These cakes made many characters and colors. Cup cakes & cookies are very pretty too!!! Cup cakes are painted cream and chocolate chips etc. these cakes has many design. I like specially Elmo’s cupcake. It is very real. Cookies are very pretty too. Because it used to some characters. For example Mickey mouse, Donald duck, spider man, and finding nimo. A next, traditional cake has different form. For example, heart, number, square cakes so on. Transportation cakes are very funny because these cakes shape are car, truck, and a sailboat. These cakes are very real I was impressed those cakes very much. Sporting cakes are soccer, baseball, tennis, rugby, swimming and so on. Corporate cakes are used by advertisement I think.
My favorite cakes vest three is baby cakes 1st picture, because it is like a castle. No2 is wedding cakes second picture, because it is simple but magnificent. So, no1 is elmo’s cup cakes. It is very pretty!!
When I see this web site is that all cakes used many color and colorful. And I think these are very sweet. However American cakes are very pretty and these cakes are not in Japan. So, if I went to America, I want to eat these cakes.I am interested in cakes and sweets. I like making cupcakes, it’s my boom. I bought a book of cupcakes. However American cupcakes are pretty than the cake of book. Next boom is making fake sweets. It is made clay and it is like evry real. I like collecting sweets goods too. So, I was very impressed to see this web site. I thought I want to make these cakes!!!
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At first, wedding cakes are very beautiful, it made three steps. These wedding cakes are not white color but also many colors. Baby cakes are very pretty. These designs are dot, many flowers, and popular characters. Cakes for kids are very pop. These cakes made many characters and colors. Cup cakes & cookies are very pretty too!!! Cup cakes are painted cream and chocolate chips etc. these cakes has many design. I like specially Elmo’s cupcake. It is very real. Cookies are very pretty too. Because it used to some characters. For example Mickey mouse, Donald duck, spider man, and finding nimo. A next, traditional cake has different form. For example, heart, number, square cakes so on. Transportation cakes are very funny because these cakes shape are car, truck, and a sailboat. These cakes are very real I was impressed those cakes very much. Sporting cakes are soccer, baseball, tennis, rugby, swimming and so on. Corporate cakes are used by advertisement I think.
My favorite cakes vest three is baby cakes 1st picture, because it is like a castle. No2 is wedding cakes second picture, because it is simple but magnificent. So, no1 is elmo’s cup cakes. It is very pretty!!
When I see this web site is that all cakes used many color and colorful. And I think these are very sweet. However American cakes are very pretty and these cakes are not in Japan. So, if I went to America, I want to eat these cakes.I am interested in cakes and sweets. I like making cupcakes, it’s my boom. I bought a book of cupcakes. However American cupcakes are pretty than the cake of book. Next boom is making fake sweets. It is made clay and it is like evry real. I like collecting sweets goods too. So, I was very impressed to see this web site. I thought I want to make these cakes!!!
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2008年9月25日木曜日
Trip to Tokyo!!!
September 20th and 21st, I went to Tokyo with my friends. We planed the trip schedule since 2 months ago. We left Kumamoto at 8:00 and we arrived at Tokyo at 9:30. At first, we went to “Akihabara” because we wanted to buy a digital camera but we couldn’t decide which we should buy it. So, we went to Mitaka because we went to jiburi museum. There are jiburi’s character and we watched original short movie. I thought Hayao Miyazaki is wonderful. Next, we went to Shinjyuku because we decided to buy same cloth. We bought it in snidel. Snidel is a very pretty brand, we will wear in concert. We went to Odaiba because concert start. The concert is my favorite musician’s concert. So I was looking forward to going there long time ago. The concert started at 18:00. When I saw him, I thought he is very very cool! I enjoyed the concert very much. The concert finished at 8:00 and we went to dinner. After that, we went to Shibuya and we stayed a net café. Next day, we got up at 5:00 and we went to Ebisu. Because my friends said that she wants to go the scene which used “Hanadan” so, we went to the spot. And we backed Shibuya we went shopping. At first, we went to 109 but we didn’t have favorite item so we went to Shibuya PARCO and we ate ice cream. The shop is famous and ice cream was very delicious. We backed 109 and we bought some clothes. Next, we went to Omotesandou because she wanted to go her favorite shop. The shop is viviene westwood. After that we backed to Shibuya. Also, we had to go an airport; we went there and bought some sweets. And we left Tokyo at 8:00. The trip was very good trip. I wanted to stay more so we will go to Tokyo next spring.
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2008年8月13日水曜日
Festival
August 9th I met a friend. She goes university in Fukuoka but she backed her home in Kumamoto, I was very happy meeting her. We talked many things in café and we went to her home. Because the day was “Hihokui festival”. She helped me put on a yukata. My yukata is white and pink, I bought it this summer. Also, her yukata is black and printed pink flowers. Her yukata is very cute. She set my yukata and I set up her hair. We walked by kumamoto castle. There were many people in the festival. We bought some foods and we looked dance. We enjoyed very much. After the festival we waited her mother. When we was waiting we talked to foreign people. They said beautiful. So, we were very happy.
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The Sea!!
August 8th I went to the sea with my friends. We went to Amakusa in my friend’s car. My friends are 3 people. One of them, I met since we are high school because she goes university in Tokyo. I was very happy meeting her. In car, we talked many things. We enjoyed talking till arriving the sea. After arrived at the sea we changed swim wear, we swam in the sea and we have a lunch. This time it became cloudy, so we went swimming. When we swimming in the sea, a man who ridding a boat called us. He picked us on a boat. We enjoyed the boat. The boat is very fast, so we fell into the sea one time. Second tome we can ride well. It was very funny. After that we backed in the shore, we changed clothes. We backed Kumamoto city. I went to part time job. I was very tired but I was much enjoyed.
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2008年8月10日日曜日
August 4-5th
August 5th is my birthday so my friends took me to eat dinner. I went to ‘YOKOMESHI’ with my friends. We ate very much and my friends gave me a present. I was very surprised and very happy. After that, we went to Karaoke and we sang a song till coming 0:00 o’clock. Just 0:00 o’clock my friends said me ‘Happy birth day!’ I was very happy. We sang many songs till morning. I enjoyed singing with my friends. After that, I went home and I slept till 12:00 and my friends came my home. And my friends took me in Kurume because August 5th is firework festival. The festival is the biggest festival in Kyusyu. I wanted to go the festival so I was very happy. When we went to Kurume, my friends gave me some present. These present were album written massage and pictures and sweets. I was very happy. I thought that this year is the happiest birthday for 20 years. After we arrived at Kurume, we ate dinner and we looked firework. It was very beautiful. I enjoyed looking it and we went to game center and we played ping pong and took ‘purikura’ it was very funny. I like my friends very much so next, I want to prepare surprised plan!!!
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2008年7月11日金曜日
My freiends
I have three best friends in college. We always have a lunch and I have some classes with them. I like them and we often go driving and shopping and drinking. Our group name is Hiyoko club. I am enjoying this life with them.
This spring vacation we went to a trip in Fukuoka. We went to aquarium. I enjoyed it. I love them. They like me.
This summer vacation we will go camping. I want to do many things with hem and I want to make many memories.
I think friends are very important I want to get along with them a long long time!!!
This spring vacation we went to a trip in Fukuoka. We went to aquarium. I enjoyed it. I love them. They like me.
This summer vacation we will go camping. I want to do many things with hem and I want to make many memories.
I think friends are very important I want to get along with them a long long time!!!
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Typing test13;My summer vacation
My summer vacation plan is part time job!!! I have to earn money. However I want to go sea, camp, and summer festivals. Last summer I went to go 5 summer festival and I did a sparkler with my friends. So, I like festival very much. This summer I will go a fireworks display with my friend. I want to go Fukuoka prefecture. Also, I think I want to wear yukata. I will buy new one. I want to go a firework display wearing yukata. Next, I will go camping. My ideal is going sea and doing a sparkler with my friends. I want to have many things and I wish making happy memorials!!!
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I think blog is so good because I can know many things. I can know a thing by reading my friend's blogs. Also, I can leave a comment. It is interesting to layout. I like paste some portrait. But my blog is easy. My friend is publishing animation and portray. It is very good. I often writing a diary, but I don't like writing book review. And renewing a blog is so hard. I have to renew about 4 times per a week. So, blog has good point and bad point I think.
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BR 1-12;Don't Be Silly
I choose this book because the picture was cute.
This story was everyone was in the play ground. Nadim had a surprise using a snake. But it was made a plastic. And Mrs. May called everyone inside. Anneene had a good idea. She wanted to play a trick on Mrs. Mag. The children went inside and Mrs. May told them to sit down. I can see the snake in the playground said Anneena. Everyone said they could see it. Mrs. May looked outside. Mrs. May gave Anneena a plastic bag. She knew it was a plastic snake. Next, there was a donkey in the playground. Mrs. May looked out of the window. She saw the donkey. They called animal rescue.
I can’t understand this story.
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This story was everyone was in the play ground. Nadim had a surprise using a snake. But it was made a plastic. And Mrs. May called everyone inside. Anneene had a good idea. She wanted to play a trick on Mrs. Mag. The children went inside and Mrs. May told them to sit down. I can see the snake in the playground said Anneena. Everyone said they could see it. Mrs. May looked outside. Mrs. May gave Anneena a plastic bag. She knew it was a plastic snake. Next, there was a donkey in the playground. Mrs. May looked out of the window. She saw the donkey. They called animal rescue.
I can’t understand this story.
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TEST!!!
July 10th TEST is starting!!!
Today, I have listening test and tomorrow is reading test. Listening test is little difficult for me. However, I didn’t absent I think I can pass. However tomorrow is reading test. The test use computer but my computer is broke down. So I can’t practice word check. This week I have test about 5 but I have part-time job. I don’t know time to do blog and typing test. I have to do it in school. However there are many people in library. So, I can’t use PC. I have to wait long time. Last Wednesday I had listening test. It was difficult for me. Also, today I had reading test. It was little difficult and tomorrow I have speaking test and international society and Japan’s test. These are most difficult I think. I wish I have credits. And I have many things to do this week. I have to a report. It is American literature class. Test is next week. I have to French assignment. I have to many things. I hang on because summer vacation is waiting me!!!
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Today, I have listening test and tomorrow is reading test. Listening test is little difficult for me. However, I didn’t absent I think I can pass. However tomorrow is reading test. The test use computer but my computer is broke down. So I can’t practice word check. This week I have test about 5 but I have part-time job. I don’t know time to do blog and typing test. I have to do it in school. However there are many people in library. So, I can’t use PC. I have to wait long time. Last Wednesday I had listening test. It was difficult for me. Also, today I had reading test. It was little difficult and tomorrow I have speaking test and international society and Japan’s test. These are most difficult I think. I wish I have credits. And I have many things to do this week. I have to a report. It is American literature class. Test is next week. I have to French assignment. I have to many things. I hang on because summer vacation is waiting me!!!
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My favorite things.
My favorite things are cooking, and collecting sweets goods. I like cooking so I often cook myself. I think I want to learn French dishes because French is very beautiful and sweets are very famous. So, I want to learn it and I like to go sweets shop. Cakes are very very cute!!! I become very interesting feel. I think that I want to make it. Also, I like collecting it. I have some cake candles, I bought it in Tokyo. These candles are short cake and cup cake and membrane and I bought magnet too. These are like macaroon. It is very cute. Also, I like collecting post card whose seeing is sweets. My boom is making cupcakes and decollate it myself, I like decollating down many color creams. When I went to Tokyo, I saw many decollated cupcakes. It was very cute. So, I bought a book and I made it. I think I want to be making sweets because I like making something and I like thinking cute design. I graduate from this school. I want to go special school in Tokyo. Also, I want to go trip in France so I will earn money to part-time job. I work part-time job 5 time par a week. I have much money.
There are many things which I want so I try to save money.
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There are many things which I want so I try to save money.
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BR 1-11:Land Of the Dinosaurs
I choose this book because I like this series. It is magic key. These books are very easy to read. Also, I like dinosaurs.
The children went through the door of the magic house. The magic took the children to the land of the dinosaurs. Chip found a foot print. It was very big. Nadim found some eggs and they are very big. One of the eggs began to crack. The frying the dinosaur flew down to the eggs. It picked up the little dinosaur in its teeth. Biff picked up a stick and ran out . ‘Go away!’ she yelled. Wilf ran on and climbed a hill. But Wilf had not climbed on a hill. He had climbed on a dinosaur and enormous. The Apatosaurus ran into the water because another dinosaur was coming and it looked very fierce. They began to run away. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow. The magic took the children to Biff’s room.
This book was very interesting.
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The children went through the door of the magic house. The magic took the children to the land of the dinosaurs. Chip found a foot print. It was very big. Nadim found some eggs and they are very big. One of the eggs began to crack. The frying the dinosaur flew down to the eggs. It picked up the little dinosaur in its teeth. Biff picked up a stick and ran out . ‘Go away!’ she yelled. Wilf ran on and climbed a hill. But Wilf had not climbed on a hill. He had climbed on a dinosaur and enormous. The Apatosaurus ran into the water because another dinosaur was coming and it looked very fierce. They began to run away. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow. The magic took the children to Biff’s room.
This book was very interesting.
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Thre three Billy- goats
I choose this book because I knew this story. Also I like this story too.
There are three goats. These are little goat, a big goat, and a very big goat. The three goats like grasses. They are hungry. The three goats see a river, they see green, green grass. They thought they want to eat green grass over there. The three goats see a bridge. There is a bad troll under the bridge. ‘This is my bridge’ said the troll. The three goats see the troll but they are very hungry. They want to eat green, green grasses. At first the little goat goes on a bridge. The troll heard the little goat. ‘ Who’s on my bridge?’ It’s me said the little goat. I want to eat the grass. The troll is hungry. ‘Come here, I want to eat you!’ he said. ‘I’m little, wait for the next goat. He is big.’ Says a little goat. The troll listened and thinks. ‘O,K,’ says a very big troll. And little goat goes on to the bridge. Next, the big goat goes on to the bridge. The troll heard same question. But ‘ wait for next goat, he is big.’ Said the bog goat. The troll thinks ‘O.K.’ says a very big troll. And the big goat goes over the bridge. Next, very big goat goes on to the bridge. The troll heard the very big goat same question. ‘ I want to eat you!!!’ ‘O,K, here I come’ says the very big troll. The very big goat runs at the troll. He hits him. Up goes the bad troll and down come the bad troll. And the very big goat goes over the bridge. So they can eat the grass.
It was happy end. This book was very interesting.
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There are three goats. These are little goat, a big goat, and a very big goat. The three goats like grasses. They are hungry. The three goats see a river, they see green, green grass. They thought they want to eat green grass over there. The three goats see a bridge. There is a bad troll under the bridge. ‘This is my bridge’ said the troll. The three goats see the troll but they are very hungry. They want to eat green, green grasses. At first the little goat goes on a bridge. The troll heard the little goat. ‘ Who’s on my bridge?’ It’s me said the little goat. I want to eat the grass. The troll is hungry. ‘Come here, I want to eat you!’ he said. ‘I’m little, wait for the next goat. He is big.’ Says a little goat. The troll listened and thinks. ‘O,K,’ says a very big troll. And little goat goes on to the bridge. Next, the big goat goes on to the bridge. The troll heard same question. But ‘ wait for next goat, he is big.’ Said the bog goat. The troll thinks ‘O.K.’ says a very big troll. And the big goat goes over the bridge. Next, very big goat goes on to the bridge. The troll heard the very big goat same question. ‘ I want to eat you!!!’ ‘O,K, here I come’ says the very big troll. The very big goat runs at the troll. He hits him. Up goes the bad troll and down come the bad troll. And the very big goat goes over the bridge. So they can eat the grass.
It was happy end. This book was very interesting.
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BR 1-10;Uglyduckling
I choose this book because I knew this story and I like this story.
A duck sits on her eggs. She sits and she waits. At last the eggs open, but one egg does not open. She sits down again and she waits. At last the egg opens. However, he was strange. He is said ugly duckling. But ugly duckling can swim. He can swim very well. The mother duck introduced her family to everyone but they say ‘He is strange’ ‘He is ugly duckling’. So, one day the ugly duckling runs away from farm. The ugly duckling is bigger. One evening the ugly duckling sees something wonderful and strange. These were three swans. It was very beautiful. The ugly duckling can fly. Then he sees a garden with a river. And he fries down. He thought he speaks to them and he c\looks down at the water and he sees his face. He is not ugly duckling any more. He is a beautiful swan too. He’s not a duck. He was a swan!!!
This story is very impressed. I think it was good that he founding he is swan.
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A duck sits on her eggs. She sits and she waits. At last the eggs open, but one egg does not open. She sits down again and she waits. At last the egg opens. However, he was strange. He is said ugly duckling. But ugly duckling can swim. He can swim very well. The mother duck introduced her family to everyone but they say ‘He is strange’ ‘He is ugly duckling’. So, one day the ugly duckling runs away from farm. The ugly duckling is bigger. One evening the ugly duckling sees something wonderful and strange. These were three swans. It was very beautiful. The ugly duckling can fly. Then he sees a garden with a river. And he fries down. He thought he speaks to them and he c\looks down at the water and he sees his face. He is not ugly duckling any more. He is a beautiful swan too. He’s not a duck. He was a swan!!!
This story is very impressed. I think it was good that he founding he is swan.
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BR 1-08;The Bully
I choose this book because this series is very interesting. I like this story.
A new girl comes to the class. Her name is Rosie and she was in Biff and Chip’s class. She didn’t look very friendly. She did something spiteful everybody. So, everyone didn’t like her. One day, Rosie pulled Chip’s ear, ‘tell me secret!’
Chip didn’t tell her a secret but he told Rosie about the magic key. Rosie wanted to see the magic key so she made Chip take him home. Rosie looked at the magic key but it wouldn’t glow. She complains but as soon as Chip took the key. It began to glow. The magic key took the children on a new adventure. The key took them to a playground. Rosie complains to a magic key. The magic key change red and glow. The magic turned Rosie into a motor mouth. Next, the key turned Rosie into a dinosaur brain and the key turned Rosie a parrot face. Rosie got very angry and began to cry. She wanted the magic adventure to stop. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow. This time, it took the children home. Rosie run her home. The children were glad. The next day, two big children were bullies. So they pushed her against the wall. Wilma had an idea and she ran and told Mrs. May. Rosie was glad that Chip and Wilma. So, she didn’t bully anyone again.
It was good story. Also, it was easy to read. I can read it without dictionary.
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A new girl comes to the class. Her name is Rosie and she was in Biff and Chip’s class. She didn’t look very friendly. She did something spiteful everybody. So, everyone didn’t like her. One day, Rosie pulled Chip’s ear, ‘tell me secret!’
Chip didn’t tell her a secret but he told Rosie about the magic key. Rosie wanted to see the magic key so she made Chip take him home. Rosie looked at the magic key but it wouldn’t glow. She complains but as soon as Chip took the key. It began to glow. The magic key took the children on a new adventure. The key took them to a playground. Rosie complains to a magic key. The magic key change red and glow. The magic turned Rosie into a motor mouth. Next, the key turned Rosie into a dinosaur brain and the key turned Rosie a parrot face. Rosie got very angry and began to cry. She wanted the magic adventure to stop. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow. This time, it took the children home. Rosie run her home. The children were glad. The next day, two big children were bullies. So they pushed her against the wall. Wilma had an idea and she ran and told Mrs. May. Rosie was glad that Chip and Wilma. So, she didn’t bully anyone again.
It was good story. Also, it was easy to read. I can read it without dictionary.
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2008年7月9日水曜日
BR 1-07;The three little pigs
I choose this book because I know this story and picture is so cute.
Once upon a time, there are three little pigs. Their names are Pinky, Percy, Poppy. They lived with their mother but the little pigs grew too big. So, they packed with their bags and waved goodbye. They met a man selling sticks. Percy built a house which made straw. He made a house very fast. Percy and Poppy pig trotted on until. They met a man selling sticks. Percy pig bought some sticks. Sticks are better than straw. Poppy pig trotted on until. She saw some bricks for sale. Poppy pig bought some bricks. Poppy pig worked hard. Bricks are better than straw and sticks but they are very heavy. The brick house was finished at night. The next day, the big bad wolf went to the straw house. He huffed and he puffed and he blew the house in. Pinky ran as fast as he could to the stick house. The wolf was just behind him. And he huffed and puffed until at last he blew the house in. Pinky and Percy ran as fast as they could to the brick house. And he huffed and he puffed and he huffed and he puffed. He ran out of puff. ‘I’m coming to get you!’ cried the wolf. He jumped onto the roof. He slid down the chimney and landed in Poppy’s cooking pot. The three little pigs slammed on the lid. And that was the end of the big bad wolf.
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Once upon a time, there are three little pigs. Their names are Pinky, Percy, Poppy. They lived with their mother but the little pigs grew too big. So, they packed with their bags and waved goodbye. They met a man selling sticks. Percy built a house which made straw. He made a house very fast. Percy and Poppy pig trotted on until. They met a man selling sticks. Percy pig bought some sticks. Sticks are better than straw. Poppy pig trotted on until. She saw some bricks for sale. Poppy pig bought some bricks. Poppy pig worked hard. Bricks are better than straw and sticks but they are very heavy. The brick house was finished at night. The next day, the big bad wolf went to the straw house. He huffed and he puffed and he blew the house in. Pinky ran as fast as he could to the stick house. The wolf was just behind him. And he huffed and puffed until at last he blew the house in. Pinky and Percy ran as fast as they could to the brick house. And he huffed and he puffed and he huffed and he puffed. He ran out of puff. ‘I’m coming to get you!’ cried the wolf. He jumped onto the roof. He slid down the chimney and landed in Poppy’s cooking pot. The three little pigs slammed on the lid. And that was the end of the big bad wolf.
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BR 1-06: Hansel and Gretel
I choose this book because I like Hansel and Gretel.
Hansel and Gretel heard their step mother shout ‘Dinner!’ and came running. It was a only slice of bread. They are very poor. Hansel and Gretel finished the last crumbs on their plates and went to them room. He blew out the candle and they tried to sleep. But they are so hungry and they can’t sleep. They heard more nagging downstairs. Their stepmother was saying. ‘Tomorrow we will take Hansel and Gretel deep into forest and leave them there. That night, Gretel had nightmares about monsters in woods. She is scared. Hansel got up and tiptoed out side. White pebbles gleamed in the moonlight. He collected as many as he could and stuffed them into his pockets. Next day, stepmother said ‘We are going on a lovely walk today.’ Hansel squeezed Gretel’s hand as they left the house, pretending they knew nothing. Stepmother didn’t see him drop pebbles, one by one, behind him. She said ‘Perhaps the children should rest.’ Stepmother and woodcutter went into the forest. Hansel and Gretel slept and got up in night. Hansel, looked around him. The mist had gone and a pebble gleamed in the moonlight. ‘Let’s go!’ he said, taking Gretel’s hand. His pebble trail led them through the shadowy forest and all the way home. When they came back home, woodcutter were surprised but stepmother scowled at them. That evening, Hansel and Gretel heard that ‘They will take them deeper into the forest this time. Hansel and Gretel lay trembling in their beds. When all was quiet. Hansel crept off to find more pebbles. But he couldn’t open the front door. His stepmother must have locked it. Next morning, she forced Hansel and Gretel out of beds, gave them a slice of stale bread to share and marched them into the forest. He crumbled it along the way to leave a second trail. ‘Another lovely place for arrest.’ said stepmother. Hansel said ‘ Don’t worry We can follow the breadcrumbs home.’ He turned to see a blackbird pecking up crumb. They couldn’t come back their home. All day they walked, they finally found a little house. The house made from many sweets. Hansel was trying to bite off the toffee apple doorknocker, when the door flew open. An old woman said ‘Enjoy my house’ Hansel and Gretel couldn’t believe their luck. Their mouths were full of cookies and candy. Next day Gretel got up but Hansel wasn’t there. Croaked the old woman said `You are just in time to help me cook.’ No longer smile. Gretel went outside and heard her brother. He shouted ‘That woman is a witch and she want to fatten up me and eat me.’ ‘Don’t worry’ she said. ‘ We will trick her and escape.’ That evening, the witch said, ‘Hold out your finger and show me how plump you are.’ Hansel held up a twig. For days, she made poor Gretel cook enormous meals. Hansel ate every mouthful, but his twig finger never got any farther. However, the witch said’ I ‘m going to eat your brother tomorrow.’ And ‘Get inside the oven and check how warm it is.’ No! Gretel replied. ‘I think my head is too big.’ Look, even I can fit inside.’ And, with a puff and a pant, she clambered in. Quick as a flash, Gretel slammed the oven shut. As the wicked witch frazzled in her oven, her spell on the shed was broken. Gretel helped Hansel. The took some jewels and a basket of snacks, then set off into the trees. Taking pity on Hansel and Gretel, the birds showed them the way home. The woodcutter overjoyed to see them. Their stepmother wasn’t there. They become very happy!!!
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Hansel and Gretel heard their step mother shout ‘Dinner!’ and came running. It was a only slice of bread. They are very poor. Hansel and Gretel finished the last crumbs on their plates and went to them room. He blew out the candle and they tried to sleep. But they are so hungry and they can’t sleep. They heard more nagging downstairs. Their stepmother was saying. ‘Tomorrow we will take Hansel and Gretel deep into forest and leave them there. That night, Gretel had nightmares about monsters in woods. She is scared. Hansel got up and tiptoed out side. White pebbles gleamed in the moonlight. He collected as many as he could and stuffed them into his pockets. Next day, stepmother said ‘We are going on a lovely walk today.’ Hansel squeezed Gretel’s hand as they left the house, pretending they knew nothing. Stepmother didn’t see him drop pebbles, one by one, behind him. She said ‘Perhaps the children should rest.’ Stepmother and woodcutter went into the forest. Hansel and Gretel slept and got up in night. Hansel, looked around him. The mist had gone and a pebble gleamed in the moonlight. ‘Let’s go!’ he said, taking Gretel’s hand. His pebble trail led them through the shadowy forest and all the way home. When they came back home, woodcutter were surprised but stepmother scowled at them. That evening, Hansel and Gretel heard that ‘They will take them deeper into the forest this time. Hansel and Gretel lay trembling in their beds. When all was quiet. Hansel crept off to find more pebbles. But he couldn’t open the front door. His stepmother must have locked it. Next morning, she forced Hansel and Gretel out of beds, gave them a slice of stale bread to share and marched them into the forest. He crumbled it along the way to leave a second trail. ‘Another lovely place for arrest.’ said stepmother. Hansel said ‘ Don’t worry We can follow the breadcrumbs home.’ He turned to see a blackbird pecking up crumb. They couldn’t come back their home. All day they walked, they finally found a little house. The house made from many sweets. Hansel was trying to bite off the toffee apple doorknocker, when the door flew open. An old woman said ‘Enjoy my house’ Hansel and Gretel couldn’t believe their luck. Their mouths were full of cookies and candy. Next day Gretel got up but Hansel wasn’t there. Croaked the old woman said `You are just in time to help me cook.’ No longer smile. Gretel went outside and heard her brother. He shouted ‘That woman is a witch and she want to fatten up me and eat me.’ ‘Don’t worry’ she said. ‘ We will trick her and escape.’ That evening, the witch said, ‘Hold out your finger and show me how plump you are.’ Hansel held up a twig. For days, she made poor Gretel cook enormous meals. Hansel ate every mouthful, but his twig finger never got any farther. However, the witch said’ I ‘m going to eat your brother tomorrow.’ And ‘Get inside the oven and check how warm it is.’ No! Gretel replied. ‘I think my head is too big.’ Look, even I can fit inside.’ And, with a puff and a pant, she clambered in. Quick as a flash, Gretel slammed the oven shut. As the wicked witch frazzled in her oven, her spell on the shed was broken. Gretel helped Hansel. The took some jewels and a basket of snacks, then set off into the trees. Taking pity on Hansel and Gretel, the birds showed them the way home. The woodcutter overjoyed to see them. Their stepmother wasn’t there. They become very happy!!!
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2008年7月6日日曜日
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