December 25th

December 25thToday, I had part time job from 13:00 to 22:00, before day I come home at 5:00. So, I was sleep. I got up 11:00 and I went to the job. I worked hard. After the job I would go Christmas party but I caught a cold. So, I went to home and I slept early time. Today was Christmas. . My ideal Christmas plan is that I want to spend with my boy friend and I would go driving to see night view. Also, we ate dinner in expensive shop and we went to home. Next, we ate cake which I made. This is my ideal Christmas plan. What did you do in Christmas?.Also. did you spend with someone?
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December 24th

December 24th
Today is Christmas Eve!! I had part time job from 11:00 to 16:00. After that, I bought two cakes in my shop. One cake is for my family, another is took for my friends. I went to my friend house, we went to shopping in hirose. We bought meet, vegetable, drink and cheese. We cooked carry nabe. It is my boom and taste is good! We enterd cheese, that was good taste. We ate very much, we ate cake which I took. Cake was very delicious.
We spend good time. After that, my friends pick me up and we bought Santa costume. We went to karaoke and change Santa costume. I spend much time too. 117

December 23rd

December 23rd
I had part time job from 11:00 to 16:00. After that, I went to party. I and my friend went to shopping. We bought much foods and drinks. We cut vegetable and made “nabe”. I enjoyed very much. Tomorrow is Christmas eve!!!
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web site review

Student ID: 07164

Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c


(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	web site review	08.09.29	5	375	0	1	4	0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	My favorite place	08.10.15	4	451	0	0	0	0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	Movie review: Mrs. Doubtfire	08.10.29	3	140	0	0	0	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	Movie review: Mrs. Doubtfire	08.11.12	4	250	0	0	0	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	Essay Secret of Kumamoto: NIght & fearful SPOT	08.11.26	5	263	0	0	0	0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	learning with computer	08.12.10	6	251	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	27	1730	0	1	4	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• ...
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
• ....
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	The Kidnappers	08.10.07	204	0
2-02	A New Zealand ADVENTURE	09.01.07	137	0
2-03	The Blue cat club	09.01.07	128	0
2-04
2-05
2-06
2-07
2-08
2-09
2-10
2-11
2-12
2-13
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
---	---	Totals:

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	√
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	√
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?		√
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	√
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	√
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	√
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")		√
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)		√
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		√
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	√
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")		√
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	√
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	√
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		√
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	√
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	√
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...
2. ...
3. ...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...
• ...
• ...
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...
• ...
• ...
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
   
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
   

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