BR:2-01:The Kidnappers

I choose the book because I like this series. This book was that kidnapper, main character is kipper. kipper is a boy who has magic key. The key is take him an adventure and this time it tooks him an adventure. He went to animal world with his toys. They went on the aeroplane to Switzerland. when the plane lnded everyone got off. There were lots and lots of bears. They took a bus and they went to front of the gate in fesstival. Kipper and his friends found a good place to sit. Suddenly, every one shouted and cheered because a famous singer bear had come on the stage. After his live, they looked that some nasty bears were pushing the famous bears into a car. It was a kidnap. The car spend away. Kipper and his friends ran after the car as fast as he could. Kipper and his friends went to the house. Kipper rand a bell. Some bears came to the door. Kipper and his friends gave honey for them. While they ate honey, Kipper and his friends help kidnapped bear. The nasty bears didn't see them because they were too busy eating the honey. One of the nasty bears

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web site review rewrite

I found very pretty web site. This site is cake shop’s site and it has many pictures. The site is divided by wedding cakes, baby cakes, cakes for kids, cupcakes & cookies, traditional cakes, transportation cakes, sporting cakes, cakes with photo, corporate cakes.

At first, wedding cakes are very beautiful, it made three steps. These wedding cakes are not white color but also many colors. Baby cakes are very pretty. These designs are dot, many flowers, and popular characters. Cakes for kids are very pop. These cakes made many characters and colors. Cup cakes & cookies are very pretty too!!! Cup cakes are painted cream and chocolate chips etc. these cakes has many design. I like specially Elmo’s cupcake. It is very real. Cookies are very pretty too. Because it used to some characters. For example Mickey mouse, Donald duck, spider man, and finding nimo.

A next, traditional cake has different form. For example, heart, number, square cakes so on. Transportation cakes are very funny because these cakes shape are car, truck, and a sailboat. These cakes are very real I was impressed those cakes very much. Sporting cakes are soccer, baseball, tennis, rugby, swimming and so on. Corporate cakes are used by advertisement I think.

My favorite cakes vest three is baby cakes 1st picture, because it is like a castle. No2 is wedding cakes second picture, because it is simple but magnificent. So, no1 is elmo’s cup cakes. It is very pretty!!

When I see this web site is that all cakes used many color and colorful. And I think these are very sweet. However American cakes are very pretty and these cakes are not in Japan. So, if I went to America, I want to eat these cakes.I am interested in cakes and sweets. I like making cupcakes, it’s my boom. I bought a book of cupcakes. However American cupcakes are pretty than the cake of book. Next boom is making fake sweets. It is made clay and it is like evry real. I like collecting sweets goods too. So, I was very impressed to see this web site. I thought I want to make these cakes!!!

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